Upcoming updates

New chapters coming this weekend and proofed versions of others to be edited. I will also be posting more Bios and content in other areas of the site.

From now on all updates will be happening on Sundays and be paced to once a week. This is to allow for flood control and keep things at an easy pace for us to keep up with.

I do hope you check back weekly. During the week other things and teasers will be posted but chapters and major updates will be only on Sundays.

thanks

Ray.

Content update

A few new sections and tons of content have been added to the blog. Please check all of the sections for new names and places.

I will be posting tons of more artwork and bios over the next few days.

CHAPTER 5

Chapter 5 has been updated. As John and the Hemsworth family deal with the trials after the attack they find a new home to work on their projects and try to build a new life. Unfortunately some unsettling news rains a dark cloud over what should be a joyful day.

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Editing!

Clark has started working on the editing and Chapter 1 is posted now in final version. As the edited chapters are completed I will edit the page. If it is a final version it will say so at the top of the page.

Chapters 5,6,7, and 8 are on their way soon.

This week I will also be posting several more concept artworks and character bios. I will also be posting a map of the planet so that readers can get an idea of location and see the connections. The map is being worked on to make sure it is clear and easy to understand. Once we get further into the story you will understand why this was so difficult.

thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the story.

Ray

P.S.  Thank you Clark for the hard work on correcting my mess ups. I have the creativity but I have never been great at the technical parts of writing. I'm sure it takes a lot of patience proofing these chapters.

CHAPTER 4 ADDED!!

Ok I know I'm on a roll but here but I'm already posting chapter 4.  I realize I only promised one update a week but when you get caught up in the story you cant help it. So here is chapter 4. Enjoy.

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Chapter 3 added!

Ok Chapter 3 is posted and ready to read. Ill be posting chapters 4 and 5 soon. Please keep checking back. This weekend Ill be posting several new items in the other sections of the site as well.

Ray

Chapter 2 updated!!

I have updated chapter 2. The original chapter is being expanded into several. It came to my attention that I had covered to much to quickly. Not allowing my readers to understand and connect to the characters. I do hope you all feel free to comment on the chapters and give me your thoughts. While i must keep the inspiration my own. That does not mean I cannot listen to honest feedback.

Please enjoy the chapter.

Ray

Site update

I have updated the site to allow for news and links to new content on the front page. The book is now on the right side panel in order of progression to make it easier to follow. Simply click on the chapter and you will find it ready to read. I do hope you enjoy.

I will have Chapter 2 extended by the end of this week delving more into the events and allowing you to better understand the situation. I will post an update here when it has been done.

Also please check the other sections of the site. I have added a few characters places and an outline introduction that will give you a better understanding of the story. Please enjoy.

Ray.

Introduction

    Delayed Dreams is a book I have been working on. I am using this blog to get feedback and share the story. As in today's society getting published is like pulling teeth I thought I would do it this way. Maybe get some attention and interest going. If it is liked and people enjoy the story I will either pursue publishing or utilize a kick starter to publish it my self. I do hope you enjoy the story.


Ray.