Editing!

Clark has started working on the editing and Chapter 1 is posted now in final version. As the edited chapters are completed I will edit the page. If it is a final version it will say so at the top of the page.

Chapters 5,6,7, and 8 are on their way soon.

This week I will also be posting several more concept artworks and character bios. I will also be posting a map of the planet so that readers can get an idea of location and see the connections. The map is being worked on to make sure it is clear and easy to understand. Once we get further into the story you will understand why this was so difficult.

thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the story.

Ray

P.S.  Thank you Clark for the hard work on correcting my mess ups. I have the creativity but I have never been great at the technical parts of writing. I'm sure it takes a lot of patience proofing these chapters.